my heart is a glorious machine;

I really like it; the prose is very beautiful and the flow of it is lovely (why do I always pay attention to the way writing flows?) I'd just like to know what brought it on: were these her thoughts after killing her first vampire, or had she been killing them for a while and suddenly began thinking these things, maybe after the adrenaline of the job started wearing off?

Very lovely--dark and beautiful. I can't wait to see it grow!